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Mortality by ~reDs--:iconreDs--:

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we attended the parties that never ended
and lived like kings and queens
happiness stretched to the horizon
                               as if we  were immortal
so the day the world collapsed
we were too paralysed in our bliss
to take a stand
and the lives we once lived
              disintegrated
                      before our very eyes
then the dances went too quickly
sunsets falling much too fast
no time to catch our breath
only to lay there choking
on the ashes of our mortality
©2007-2008 ~reDs--
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I don't know. Sporadic kind of.

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~Natalaysya:iconNatalaysya: Jun 9, 2007, 7:05:56 PM
sporadic poetry= best poetry.

no thinking necessary.

favourites, however, are a must.
~Neko-Reni:iconNeko-Reni: Jun 9, 2007, 11:16:50 PM
i love it, as usual.

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~VanthMithra:iconVanthMithra: Jun 10, 2007, 5:17:24 AM
good poetry. really reflects on current events..

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~necrocerberus:iconnecrocerberus: Jun 10, 2007, 5:56:32 AM
good stuff =D its all gotta end sometime...

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~windwater:iconwindwater: Jun 10, 2007, 12:32:13 PM
oh i love it, except for the last line, which doesn't seem to fit for me.
but i lurf it ^_^

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this is Bunny
~reDs--:iconreDs--: Jun 10, 2007, 2:20:10 PM
haha oh there's still a wee little bit of thought needed ;)
thanks

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Life sucks, I know. I just say it in a much more eloquent way
~reDs--:iconreDs--: Jun 10, 2007, 2:20:52 PM
haha thanks

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Life sucks, I know. I just say it in a much more eloquent way
~reDs--:iconreDs--: Jun 10, 2007, 2:21:30 PM
yeah, thank you.

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Life sucks, I know. I just say it in a much more eloquent way
~reDs--:iconreDs--: Jun 10, 2007, 2:26:10 PM
unfortunately as with all good things, happiness too, comes to an end.
thanks for the comment

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Life sucks, I know. I just say it in a much more eloquent way
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